That Broken Heart.

Aren't you tired of the judging?

Aren't you tired of the hearing?

The taunts that hit the deep ends of heart and kill you from within every second that goes by,

It poisons you, drugs you, gives you the sensation of something unwanted,

You live past it, you smile past it.

Fake a smile at your problems, show them that you're better than that, 

That you're stronger than that,

You know you have feelings, you know you have a broken heart,

A broken heart that beats past the pain you've been through.

Show the world your real smile,

Show the world your strength,

Show it those those orthodox people who think girls are a pain.

Hurting your hand,

Thinking of suicides,

Is all you do, because you're a coward living in this whole wide world.

Don't mark your hand with those objects,

Don't waste your blood to show the world you're dumb enough to do that,

Just keep your head high, smile a bit and see all your problems walk by.

Author's Note

Live your life the way you want, not the way others want you to. Keep smiling.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So much strength and raw emotion in this write.
love these lines it takes a strong person to walk
away and hold their high and know it will all be alright. thank you
for sharing Blessings my friend.

Just keep your head high, smile a bit and see all your problems walk by.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. It sure does. (:

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're quiet welcome my strong friend. Blessings

[KittyVenus]

beautiful, I love it! it shows love in a way that I never could

[Simran Kewlani]

You can! Your poems are way better than mine. Thank you btw. I appreciate your review.

[xDalliance]

"A broken heart that beats past the pain you've been through."
Wow. I'm rendered speechless. This poem just speaks through those people who are in helpless pain. You may have just shown them that they are more than that :)

[Simran Kewlani]

You're one of those people who catch the central idea of my poems. Thank you. (:

[Frieda P]

Strong words filled with much positivity and wise deductions, every young girl should read this and follow suit. Well said, and nicely pen'd. :-)

[Simran Kewlani]

Wow! These words are coming from one of the finest poets I have come across.
Thank you. (:

[Frieda P]

You're too kind, you humble me with your sweet words, you did an outstanding job here, give yourself some kudos as well. :-)

[Simran Kewlani]

They all go towards you, looking at your poems. Nothing remains to give myself. ;)

[Traci]

"Show the world your real smile,
Show the world your strength,"

This poem is filled with wisdom, and no truer words have been spoken. We must find our own happiness, live our own lives the way we want, without the interference and negativity of others. Your poem is a perfect example of this, showing strength, offering encouragement and bringing awareness. Well done, Simran.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thanks a lot Traci. This poem is one of my favourites. (:

[Sami Khalil]

"Show the world your real smile,

Show the world your strength,"

So true and well spoken. I like the whole poem...:)....................

[Simran Kewlani]

Thanks a lot! I appreciate.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Love this poem. It's its so god damn true. Nicely written. :-D

Kaze~

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

All good. :)

[Demii]

This is so true, and is a great advice. People are better then that, and sometimes writing like this helps people realize it. :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. (: