He Is Love.

Love came back walking,

Locking me in his arms,

Taking me along.

Snapping me out of my fantasy,

Taking me along his life,

For once I lived life and not just survived.

I knew what love is,

But not what it meant,

For now I can see it in front of my eyes.

His eyes boring holes in my back,

As I walk back into the fantasy I possess,

Away from life, away from pain.

I walked back into the prison of life,

Hoping for happiness,

But all I saw was love walking away and my dream breaking down.

Reviews

[J.Nico]

Love is quite a dimention in itself, that more often than not, we borrow into our life. Thing is, no one will demand love back, it can be ours for life. Oh, sure, we can give it, and the real trick is keep giving it. It is never wrong to give, the wrong is in staying.
Actually, love is not something to talk about, just feel. Where love is concerned talking sounds like justification. It requires none. Ever.

[Simran Kewlani]

Wow, that is a beautiful thought. I'm glad you are keeping an eye on my writings. :)

[J.Nico]

Both eyes, in truth. And more I guess. I enjoy the lasting effect your words have.

[KWP]

Harsh experience and hopefully wisdom gained ... sometimes we must lose what we hold most dear to understand ourselves better ... nice one xx

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, KWP. Glad to read your review.
Hope you're fine. :)

[Lauriegirl]

What a statement you make with this!

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. :)

[Frieda P]

It's gut wrenching that feeling you describe Simran, the sentiment was well done, I felt this one.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Frieda. :)
Hope you're fine.

[amrit]

i liked the last 3 lines , they just amplify the chaos inside . an easy going poetry where one enjoys every single emotion.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Amrit. :)

[LL]

Nice writing Simran:) Some things that come our way hurt us deeply. But behind the hurt is wisdom gained and the opportunity to learn and to improve. Even when the light is not shining, it's just beyond the clouds---Levi

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Levi. :)

[LL]

Your welcome:)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Truly emotional write. Beautifully written, I loved reading it. :-)

Kaze~

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you. :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I love this Simmy.It is so honest and well written.Truly emotional pen my dear :)

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Vee. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome sugar :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

All it takes is the right person to make us feel things we never though we could… lovely piece of emotion outpour.

[Simran Kewlani]

Thank you, Cowboy. :P