Buried Beneath

Buried Beneath

A Poem by singingtree

The real me
so far away
buried beneath;
who I'm supposed to be
who I pretend to be

Beneath all the hate
built up over time
at those I used to love
at those I never did

Beneath all the actions and words
that I wished I could take back
that took away
what's important to me
that hurt the ones I love

Beneath all those unshed tears
over scars of accusation
bruises of misunderstanding
wounds given to me
by those I thought loved me

The real me
buried beneath all those things
I wish it could come out
out from under all those things
if only it could come out
the real me

© 2014 singingtree


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singingtree
how's my first published poem?

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Very good wish I could be noticed and become published.You should be proud of yourself yet give God the glory for your suscess.I believe the real you has immerged you were published.Keep up with the good work.Your unique in expressing feelings.

Posted 9 Years Ago


singingtree

9 Years Ago

thank-you :)
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

your welcome
Great poem, the style and structure is very sound, I can see why this would get published.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I'm a middle school student who enjoys writing peotry, short stories, and screen plays. When I'm not reading or writing, I'm playing the piano. more..

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