Intrinsic vs. Extrinsic Senryu
A Poem by
Steve L.
I vacillate between these often...
Meager
speck of sand?
Center of the universe?
Which describes my life?
© 2014 Steve L.
Reviews
Wow !u got it right ,about oscillating in between . The balance,the equilibrium , these intriguing lines are something to think about for hours, an introspection stuff ... i enjoyed this.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
My viewpoint can change on an hourly basis. Thank you!
The acceptance of how tiny we are comes through so clearly in these lines; but it is that innate ability to understand this, that makes us more than simply a speck of sand.
T
Posted 9 Years Ago
The acceptance of how tiny we are comes through so clearly in these lines; but it is that innate ability to understand this, that makes us more than simply a speck of sand.
T
9 Years Ago
Very well stated!! Thank you for the review.
Wow, nice job. I don't know which to pick either. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Wow, nice job. I don't know which to pick either. :)
9 Years Ago
True!! Mine can change by the hour :)
I enjoyed this thought provoking little gem!
:) Julie
Posted 9 Years Ago
I enjoyed this thought provoking little gem!
:) Julie
9 Years Ago
I am very happy that you enjoyed this! Thank you!
9 Years Ago
My pleasure Steve :)
I like when you dig deep Steve.. I think we have all often wondered the same thing a time or two. I love the way you phrased this... well done my friend..
Posted 9 Years Ago
I like when you dig deep Steve.. I think we have all often wondered the same thing a time or two. I love the way you phrased this... well done my friend..
9 Years Ago
I really appreciate it, April. Thank you.
Interesting introspection here.....where do we stand in the universe? Everyone has asked that question at one time or another. Lydi*
Posted 9 Years Ago
Interesting introspection here.....where do we stand in the universe? Everyone has asked that question at one time or another. Lydi*
9 Years Ago
Definitely...I guess it depend on your outlook...
Very interesting indeed. I like the font usage as well, highlighting the vacillation.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very interesting indeed. I like the font usage as well, highlighting the vacillation.
9 Years Ago
Thank you! Using different fonts is definitely not my strong suit...
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