A penny for your thoughts

A penny for your thoughts

A Poem by sk8tagirl95

Sometimes I sit around all day,

wondering,

what the world looks like from your eyes.

If the sea is shimmery blue

with the waves licking the sand.

If the mountains are grassy green

and the trees dancing in the wind.

If the sun is as bright

like a childs face when receiving a gift.

Do you see all this?

Or do you see more?

© 2008 sk8tagirl95


Author's Note

sk8tagirl95
sowhat do ya think...im not sure i know

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This is such a beautiful poem. I can picture the scenes in my mind. You used good descriptive words to create a beautiful image. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


It is nicely put together and has wonderful images

Posted 15 Years Ago


It is a nice one:) Your poem is nicely put together and makes a lot of sense! It is simple ... yet profound...
Great write here! I like it very much:)

Salam to you :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


I adore it....
very good use of words and great idea.
good work
xxx

Posted 15 Years Ago



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sk8tagirl95
sk8tagirl95

Cape Town, South Africa



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Hey, how are ya doing??? Im 13 and live in Cape Town with my parents. I love life and my quote for the day is: "Love doesn't make the world go roung but it makes the ride worth while." more..

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