False Perceptions

False Perceptions

A Poem by Sonia

Excitement builds up so easily
Snuffed out with a sickening blow
Always second place, runner up
Nothing good to show

Her voice speaks loud and clear
Her beauty undeniable
Me a worthless wretch
Unchangeable, unpliable

With cloddish hands i wish to create
but only break do i
Unpractical and childish
Fool myself with lies

I used to think grandeur
Now only dirt and rubble
Underneath a taller shadow
Denying not worth the trouble

© 2010 Sonia


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I really enjoyed this because I can truly relate. I love the word choice and the way this flowed, beautiful writing. I like this piece alot.

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