Soul Alone

The Poem is not a reflection of my mentality at this point in time. :)

My Soul is wearied by worries and woes

and if you've suffered the same 

then you know how it goes...

"Life's an adventure,

 a journey,

a ride"

Then why do i feel so empty inside?

No dreams to pursue

No spark in my heart

labelled damaged goods 

"Failed from the start"

Desires; there are none 

ideals? what are they?

my last resort is to

just hide away

That way hope

can never be false

and if comes the day 

then it's solely my fault

For who is to blame 

when you're hurt and alone

and your only company 

is your own?

Reviews

[Gray]

Such a great little poem even if sad with nice rhymes.

[Skib]

Thanks Grey. :) I am happy you like it

[Sapientiam]

I extremely loved the flow of words within this. Each line had a bumpy sense of rhythm that I adore. Thanks for sharing this!

[Skib]

thank you so much :) i am glad you enjoyed the chaos :p

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very good. How I feel sometimes when I feel so terrible and just feel alone. Great job :)

[Skib]

I hope that is not too often :) thanks a lot

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

It isn't too often don't worry :) and your very welcome :)

[Skib]

:) phew x im glad

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Lol :) :p :))