Dreams

Dreams

A Poem by skr_perceptions
"

motive which forced to be alive

"

In between the past that are being yesterdays 

and the future that carries the burden of hope,

I sewed the truth of present.

I knew earlier that this would happen.

The dreariness realised during the day.

The restlessness realised during the night. 

Unexplainable! You filled the cosmos.

Even if there are many colours,

for my fiery love, 

for my revolutionary vigour and

for the blood I scattered,

you gave red gulmohars.

And in the glimpse of that memory, I live.

For my uncharted wanderings, 

there is no beginning and end without you.

In the parade of failures; I, me, myself being the truth, 

I’m once again searching for the enigma that you are


© 2017 skr_perceptions



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Losing someone we adore, and adore a lot, missing the,their presence after departure, and not getting these people, that happiness and that brightness in life, haunts one very badly.The mind wants to forget, but the heart fails to.. Because the person touched our soul then..And those people can never be forgotten.the Scars remain as such

They are like the drug which kept us alive then, and the soul yearns their presence now. I could relate with your words!

You've expressed this feeling beautiful ly in this poem, the fact, that time flies..But the memories..Those special memories don't fade away :)

Thankyou for sending me the RR for this poem, Neetha and Thankyou skr_perceptions for writing and sharing it here 😊

-Saumya.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skr_perceptions

5 Months Ago

thank u for u r kind words
Saumya

5 Months Ago

You're welcome



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I was really moved by your words, especially the first two stanzas. They are deeply relatable and it reminded me of how grief feels like, as if time itself is frozen and you're stuck in between two spaces. I very much enjoyed reading this. Great job!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how elegantly this piece is. The subject is sad, and very relatable. It touched my heart for sure!
Your descriptions were brilliant! Very creative way to express the feelings you are addressing! Impressive! Well done!
Tabby

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Losing someone we adore, and adore a lot, missing the,their presence after departure, and not getting these people, that happiness and that brightness in life, haunts one very badly.The mind wants to forget, but the heart fails to.. Because the person touched our soul then..And those people can never be forgotten.the Scars remain as such

They are like the drug which kept us alive then, and the soul yearns their presence now. I could relate with your words!

You've expressed this feeling beautiful ly in this poem, the fact, that time flies..But the memories..Those special memories don't fade away :)

Thankyou for sending me the RR for this poem, Neetha and Thankyou skr_perceptions for writing and sharing it here 😊

-Saumya.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skr_perceptions

5 Months Ago

thank u for u r kind words
Saumya

5 Months Ago

You're welcome
Your words carry depth. Plenty of layers to peel back. Had to read it more than once. A most enjoyable read.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skr_perceptions

5 Months Ago

thank u so much for u r kind words
duff

5 Months Ago

You're very welcome.
An enigma that gives reason for nixes in the cerebral... Deeply penned...

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skr_perceptions

5 Months Ago

ya i hope so . thank you yaar for ur beautiful words
Silente

5 Months Ago

Of course, my pleasure...
Haha...Deep it is and touching....I loved it..:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skr_perceptions

5 Months Ago

hope u enjoy the feelings too . thank u for ur words
good one...such a wonderful write.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skr_perceptions

5 Months Ago

thank u so much dear
this is a good piece!! i really like the emotion in this, well done:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Such a beautiful, emotional and heart warming poem!
Well, done keep it up!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful indeed! Glad that my siso sent me the RR to read this..I enjoyed reading this..I loved the first three lines..thanks for sharing..keep writing :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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