last puff

last puff

A Poem by skr_perceptions
"

alone

"

I used to be fine in my loneliness 

but something or someone snapped me out of it

and showed me company.

I have given myself to her

No barriers remain Left between us,

Only my fingures.

If you wanna be my last puff

Just roll your body

Lick my lips with fire

And burn to melt with my soul.

Suddenly i found myself

Smoking circles in my room

It was just a dream,and i was not completed



© 2017 skr_perceptions



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I really like what you did here! :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skr_perceptions

3 Months Ago

thank u so much
Shows a character once lonely, feeling that absolute love... Describing the process of smoking was nice too. Then the ending was a sad but like a snap to reality. It was good, thanks for sharing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

skr_perceptions

3 Months Ago

ya that's what i exactly means yaar and iam very happy that u understand the emotions. thank u for u.. read more

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Added on July 5, 2017
Last Updated on July 5, 2017
Tags: poetry, addition, cigarettes

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skr_perceptions
skr_perceptions

kochi, India



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A Poem by skr_perceptions