Losing Myself

LOSING MYSELF

I found you, when I lost myself 

I found you, when I trusted myself 

I found you, when your were not with me

I found you, when you were part of my dreams

I found you, when you were busy sorting mess

I found you, when you were dressed in pretty pink face

LOSING myself I found you my love

LOSING myself I want you to hold "very close"

Come fall into my arms, I know you have lots of tears in your eyes & that I know.....

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sky... I found you in the notes of
lovely Tanager birdsong... holding you close
on branches where soft winds sing lullabies.
Your poet pen is sweet like honeysuckle wine.
dearly,Pat

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

It seems I really found the perfect place to showcase my art. Thanks Patricia your words really means a lot for me.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sky... you have been around before. I think your poem is very romantic. I even review poems with romantic notions. It seems to give poets encouragement. Every poet has his or her style.
truly, Pat

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Pat :)

[Chris Shaw]

When we are at our most vulnerable is often when we understand our own needs better I liked your thoughts here and the way they were conveyed.


Chris

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes you are correct. Odd times is really a thought time in life. Thanks Chris

[Chris Shaw]

You are most welcome SKY.

[Coyote Poetry]

Perfect flow of words and thoughts. I liked how you led the reader to the very good ending. Thank you SKY for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks Coy it was a joy to read your review friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Poetry should flow and the poem did and you are welcome SKY.

[Pradnya]

Nice one . It has a deep meaning . U have a great art of expressing your peoms in simple words yet deeply meaning ful. Anybody can relate to it. Thanks for sharing

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

When you really love someone deep, words certainly find ways to express. You are most welcome :)

[kitty]

This is sort of personal but I am surprised that no one has reviewed it. You I see have left it to the reader to complete your innermost thoughts and feelings. Nice work!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Well i had been reviewed by many earlier but i have deleted all the reviews. I had more than 120 poems on WC but deletd all and also deleted all reviews. At times, WC is cruel place too...

[kitty]

You have brought a new realization to view, thanks.

[kitty]

As one grow one learns about life's complexities.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes exactly my friend.