A sexy brevity piece …envy ….want, wish…. And maybe she will send you her heart…I like the subtle romance in this brevity,
Thanks for sharing
Warmly, B
Posted 1 Week Ago
1 Week Ago
Thank you very much for your inspirational review. Pleasure reading it :)
This little poem of wishes is cute. Full of warmth. Made me smile:)
Chris
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Thanks Chris! I read somewhere love is a fond of small things. So scribbled this one. Your review ma.. read moreThanks Chris! I read somewhere love is a fond of small things. So scribbled this one. Your review made me smile as well. Thanks again :)
Many a poet and artist has used their talent to lure a lover to their side. For we best reveal our emotions by way of the quill or brush. And such are the gifts of our talents, it is not hard for those less gifted to succumb to our art.
Small note: typo in second to last....repetition of 'me'.
Nice work.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you so much for correcting me friend. Happy that you like the prose :)