Mistake

Mistake

A Poem by Sky





Mistake

People learn from their mistake and they move on in life.
I've made a mistake and stopped in life
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.
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A
Beautiful
Mistake 
To
Love
You
❤ NB ❤

© 2017 Sky



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Gul
Hey sky!!!
Great mistake you did in your life, to love someone. But, I think you are making one mistake "not to move on in your life, as other did"

Please try this one, this will be more beautiful than the last one.

Sorry!! but its just a suggestion.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sky

1 Month Ago

Thanks Gul. I take your suggestion indeed this time life would surprise me rather.
Life is made up many mistakes, that can either define who you are or shape you into someone new and better. I really love this, so very short, but so beautifully strong!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sky

1 Month Ago

Thanks LKB. Yes life is full of mistakes. Some are sweet ones some soar.
I like to read "mistake" as a "mis" take, like a movie director telling his cast to "take 2", "take 3" etc....it takes time to get things right, in life and in love.

It helps though to not make the same mistakes again.....that is just foolishness!


Great poetry!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sky

1 Month Ago

Thanks friend for the visit and review.
You had spoken my heart here!
Yes..........A mistake to Love!

Lovely Piece
:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sky

1 Month Ago

Yes a mistake rather a sweet mistake to love someone :)
:) you are my fav. mistake... such a beautiful line :)

many times felt like that hehe...still learning to stop repeating the mistakes.. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sky

1 Month Ago

Gentleman!!
Galadriel

1 Month Ago

u want me to read tht poem ;)
Sky

1 Month Ago

lol I don't mind :)

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