~ohhhh how i feel~

how i miss the undieing love in my heart at this moment in time the torment is strong and fresh in this beating heart ohh how i miss the sweet sound of the breath i my ear as we lie together at this moment in time the sound is gone for ever just the lonely sounds of my accing heart how i loved the smell of your sweet sent but thats no more just the agonizing smell of hurt and pain

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You have expressed heartache in such a sensitive way... this moves me.. very touching. Nice write. :)



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[Coyote Poetry]

Love make us the king of the forest. Then can knock us down to the creatures of the night. Love is the purpose. I like the use of breath and smell to make your point in the poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote