us

us

A Poem by gothicchica
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this is dedicated to somone

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If Only...

  a diffrent year, another look,

a better me,

a third chance,

a nicer cast,a slower us,

another word,

a diffrent guy

 

Your Lies...

  didnt help, or make an us,

there never was,

a simple love, an uncontrolled want,

a lustful desire,

a love blinds,

a better us

 

 

© 2011 gothicchica


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This was enjoyable great poem indeed :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


i really like this! the wording is beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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