Love Easily Broken

For the all the broken hearts out there.

I opened my eyes on a morning light

Trying to see if there's a pretty good sight

Still there's nothing but a sad plain room

And my heart's still waiting for a love to bloom

I sat back and leaned against the wall and thought;

"Why were we arguing? Why did we fought?"

I remembered when you hit the brakes too hard

Our lives were to end, like a folded poker card

It's a miracle that both of us are still breathing

You visited my room and said it'll be our last meeting

Right then you apologized and left so swiftly

What a way to say goodbye when I'm hurting so badly

I still yearn that one day you'll open the door

In this hospital room, you'll apologize once more

But I don't see how that's ever going to happen

Cause our love was easily made and was just easily broken

Author's Note

Criticism is appreciated !

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most promising piece, I've re-read it a couple of times, and the flow is perfect and your use of language persuades, I would however try and leave complication alone for now, well done, good read.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Its a realistically written poem. Indeed love is easily made and easily broken.
I don't usually critisize but I noticed in your composition the line:
"Why did we fought?"
Here fought should not be used with 'did' as its a grammatical error. You could change the line into:
"Why we fought?"
Otherwise its a really good read and heart-felt. And please don't count this as critisism ☺