Embrace It, Do It

Just think.

Let the feelings fill your soul

And enter your mind.

Let them riddle your body

With tingles and itches,

So much so that

You find yourself pacing

Before you can bring

Your hand to grab a pen.

Let them make it unbearable

For you to suffocate them

In your subconscious.

Allow thought, mind, nerves, 

And hand to work as one.

Fluidity.

Give them The Gift.

Matrimony.

Reunite old lovers,

Carbon and Wood.

Let their intimacy be shown

To the world.

Let your thoughts

Fuel their passion.

Reviews

[Starrbitt]

It's skillfully written and absolutly beautiful! It gets deep and that pulls your reader deeper into this feeling.
Very Inspiring.

[Chris]

interesting thoughts...

Good flow.

[-musicfunk-]

I guess 'them in your subconscious' should be 'then..'
clear words from the heart
=]

[Jordan A. Wilson]

it's supposed to be 'them' but i just typed it one too many times. thanks for the heads up.

[-musicfunk-]

oh,haha
your welcome
=]

[Newspaper Skeleton]

Beautifully written. I absolutely adore this.

[w]

Very nice piece. The only two issues I have are the double use of "Them" and the fact that you don't send me a read request. Your work is very good and enjoyable to read (unlike some of the other stuff I am asked to read).

[Jordan A. Wilson]

you don't get my requests? i send them to all the ppl i am friends with on here.

[w]

I don't seem to get them. ::shrug::

[Cole Hayley]

Embrace it, do it. I LOVE that title and I LOVE this poem, a great job Jordan.

[Harley (arbiter)]

AWESOME! I loved this.

[R.A. Youngblood]

I like the way you put all these words in and on what place, it means that i like your style. This is descriptive, passionate, emotional, painful yet powerful.
I specially like the ending, it's the most magical and beautiful to me.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

[kayla]

This is great. I love it.