Chopped & Screwed

A crossroads.

A conundrum

Left side and right side.

Stay here getting screwed or go it alone being chopped?

Neither answer in sight.

I support the left, but I'm leaning towards the right.

Reviews

[Lunny]

* a crossroad
it started so plain and simple but when I got to the end i loved it! :)

[Jordan A. Wilson]

I said "crossroads" on purpose lol. But I appreciate the kind words. Thanks!

[Laura Maidah]

Neat. Clean. COncise. Last sentence really encompasses the crux of the piece perfectly. Nice.

[Mazie Tackett]

wow scary

[Chris]

...and staggering down the middle.

"T's" in a path are pretty definitive once you turn... its the ditch directly in front that screws ya every time.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good movement of words and thoughts. I like the open ending. Sometime we can't win either way we lean. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cole Hayley]

i really like it. Im not sure if this is a politcal alegory or if im just reading to much in to it.

[Rebbie Louise]

I feel political vibes here haha, great job! :)

[ewest1220]

Feels... political? Well that's the feeling I got at least. Has a great tone to it great job my friend!

[Layla J Omorose]

I loved this poem. The last line finished the poem off well and pulled it all together. I sensed a undercurrent of urgency and indecision with no clear answer in sight. Great work

[victoria]

oh wonderful, such is the dilema of change.