Revolution

Revolution

A Poem by Jordan A. Wilson

rancid rules rain down
eyes rolling from side to side
let the fools abide

© 2012 Jordan A. Wilson


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Rules shouldn't be called rancid usually. I don't think this is an exception.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jordan A. Wilson

11 Years Ago

It's a special set of rules that are seen as oxymoronic and as a contradiction lol. Just a metaphor .. read more
Laura Maidah

11 Years Ago

In context of a poem
The poem is short and to the point. I like the flow of words and thoughts in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago
short but strong..well done

Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow. Powerful stuff in such a small poem. Very well written. Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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 Added on August 9, 2012
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Jordan A. Wilson
Jordan A. Wilson

Carrollton, KY



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I'm a 22 year old Entrepreneurship Student of Northern Kentucky University from the small town of Carrollton, Ky. I play guitar and began writing poetry as a hobby four years ago. My main goals in wri.. more..

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