Write On

the complete truth of how things are right now. I'll put more in authors note.

I may have to go
It will be soon
I'm so sorry
to all of you

She doesn't understand
how much it mean
for me
to write

If I one day disappear
you will know why
It's because she
took me away

When I go,
I hope it won't be soon,
I just want you all to know
I'll miss writing, and all of you

This may be
 good bye
I hope not
but if it is...

Well...
write on
even as I
 cannot

Reviews

[Grayeyes]

I love it. Don't worry, if you must, rip out a pen and paper and write your heart out on it. I know, not as good as typing (Trust me, I love typing better than writing), but I get my ideas at night, when my laptop is not allowed to accompany me, so I write them down. (:

[Dhaye]

a nice poem... don't worry. there will be right time for everything.

[eeoopig]

This is a beautiful poem. I know you probably wrote this ages ago, but still I hope you don't go. You are a great writer and I love all of your poems. I hope you manage to convince your mom that you love writing. Well, if not, just write everything down so you can post stuff up hopefully in the future! Again, good work on this poem!

[darkgoddess]

write on in a journal and one day you will return to post them.

[Sami Khalil]

The ending is nice...Thank you for sharing...

[Felecia]

Great poem. I hope that you mother doesn't make you leave! ): I know what you're going through. I've had my computer taken away so many times, I can't count anymore. I hope everyting works out for you!

[deepblue04]

awwwh, i feel so sorry for you! I hope you don't!

[Mariah Corey]

Well said. What, sometimes i wish parents could see and hear like we do and understand what we love and what makes us live. i am srry, tht sucks. well keep writing anywhere you can and on anything because you have a great talent. :D

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Another friend leaving...this is my poem "The Watcher" all over again. I just wanted to say, even if you leave this site, you can still continue writing. Pen & paper style!

[Koda Demitri Tucker-Elr..]

I dont want you to stop writing! From one author to another, that would just be DEVASTING!! I dont think she understands the relationship between one and their pen.

This was masterfully penned and I felt the heartache and pain just from reading it. Its my worst fear, not being allowed to do what I love so much. I just met you but I already have a good connection with you, and would be sad if you left :( I hope it all works out!

[Abbie]

yeah it is kind of, but good thing is, as of right now... my mom is just watching me, its kinda creepy... O.o XP. I have only an hour or so a day so I try to make the most of it (she's in Maine right now...so I'm going over my time limit...but don't tell its a secret! XP ). the chances of me leaving now, aren't theat good anymore, cuz I proved to my mother that I love writing. (it's a very, very, VERY long story.) :D so thanks for the review, I'm glad you like my work. ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

Writing is a lifetime activity. I have 40 books of poetry and story i wrote before the internet. Good to write down words too. One day you will have your own life. Can write or do what your please. Keep the site alive. I have improved my writing skill with time a a lot of help. I hope to keep reading your work. Have fun and be safe.
Coyote