I Care

for a friend who doesn't think I should care

I care

I really do
 I care so much
oh so much
about you

I care about
all my friends
and my family
and you...
you are no exception

Even when
I fight
against friends
and  family
I care
 
Even when they
leave me
alone
and lost
I still care

So I will always
care for you
and about you
no matter what happens
I promise. I care. Forever.

Reviews

[Forever Hidden]

I. NEED. MORE. OF. YOUR. POEMS!!!! I've read like all of yur writing, but I never reviewed XD Sorry! Anyways, I got really emotional while reading this!
I love, love, love, REALLY FRICKIN' LOVE this poem!!!! The last sentence was the
BEST line I've ever read in my whole life!

Yeah. I know I'm epic! :P

100/100

[Felecia]

This one has completely hit home for me. I try to do my best and do nothing but care...even if others think I shouldn't. I'm selfless, you could say. I feel we should all care about one another, whatever the cost. But of course, there are times when you need to care about youself first, before you can care for others. I'm working on that part. Anyway! This is a great poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. Good job.

[deepblue04]

this is good, i like it!!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Once we really care, it's difficult to ever really stop.

[FrancescaX]

my friends would have called you a 'deep guy'. lovely. i wish i could stamp it on some of my friends' brain.

[MOON]

Lovely depth to this .

[Mariah Corey]

fits the title perfectly, well done. :D

[Ireca]

Great expression. Keep up the good work.

[Keri Hart]

Truly beautiful and it send a tru strong wondrful mssg
Yet another gr8 piecec!!!

[harry]

good job