Against the Tide

 

 

 

I watch your drift in a sea that claims you

 

powerless to fight the tide that take you

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The tide is strong...but with a guided hand, a soul can come out of it okay...This is a powerful write...such a poignant piece, with few words used.... Brilliant!

[Bats In The Belfry]

Thank you kindly Robbie, so sweet,i am humbly flattered

[Revery]

I see visions of outstretched arms and hands and finger tips in this write, but in sad reach that doesn't close the gap. A soul morning before it is time to mourn. Such a small amount of words with such a large meaning, nice write dear.

[Bats In The Belfry]

Oh lord...you always get me! (wipes tears away) Thank you for another lovely review : )

[Revery]

Well, I didn't mean to do that. I could tell jokes next instead???

[Bats In The Belfry]

Bahaaa...It was needed. I needed someone to see what I felt. Jokes always welcome!

[Revery]

Kindred spirits are good for that. :)

[Bats In The Belfry]

Indeed : )