Cousin Clair

We all have a cousin we dont look forward to meeting. The poem is about one such person and his cousin Clair.

In the morning, I open the larder shelf

to get some chocolates for myself,

my mother warned me herself

"Don't you dare!

Those are for little Clair!"

"Clair? When, where and how?"

"Your aunt is dropping her now."

The doorbell rings and its time for me to bow.

"Don't you dare

being rude to little Clair!"

As the little devil enters, I say

"M going. I have a match to play!"

"Take her along." my Mom says to make my day.

"Don't you dare

saying no to take little Clair!"

On our way we meet Mr. and Mrs. McCall 

"We're going to play baseball

but Clair'd like to be with you all."

"Don't you dare

to take little Clair!"

I reach the field without company

to hear the news from Kenny

"No match due to the absence of Danny."

Seeing my rage he adds, "Don't you dare

to complain! He's gone to meet little Clair."

I leave the field full of frustration,

with a ruined day due to the cancellation.

Thanks to the impact Clair has on the whole population.

I murmur, "Don't you dare

to act smart with little Clair."

Author's Note

Pls help me make it better

Reviews

[Saddam]

very beautiful song at your cousin. she is little rude, as you think, but she is cute too.
so don't you dare
saying that boring is clair.
It is loke tongue twist. well done dear.

[Sami Khalil]

"Don't you dare!

Those are for little Clair!"




"Clair? When, where and how?"

"Your aunt is dropping her now."

[Rose of many colours]

I like it the way it is, it is unique, Has a great rythmn,this piece is full of suprises..

[Mockingbird]

conveys the frustration of the boy who is forced give up his whole day for his little cousin. many people could probably relate to him. great job.

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Make it better? I think you did a great job. Your rhyme scheme flows very well with the story line. Minus a few easily fixable grammatical errors, you did a great job. I very much liked the ending; it made me laugh. It's cute. I like it :)

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you for sharing...:)....................