Death...Sex...Ex Lover

Death...Sex...Ex Lover

A Poem by smilempsn
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Just wrote for a competition....

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    Death .. O Death..

            When will you take me away from all these irrational things..
    Death .. O Death..
            When will you bless me with all the peace after so called Life..
    Death .. O Death..
            When will I will be lucky enough to leave this body and go to solace..



    Sex.. O Sex..
            When will you stop defining me, in Male Female..
    Sex.. O Sex..
            When will you understand that both should be considered equal...
    Sex.. O Sex..
            When will you won't pay attention to the urges you have...



    Ex Lover.. O Lover..
            When will you love me like you Did...
    Ex Lover.. O Lover..
            When will I completely forget you...
    Ex Lover.. O Lover..
            Till when I should wait for removing that 'X' from you...





© 2013 smilempsn


Author's Note

smilempsn
Just wrote for a competition... Will modify more laters ^-^

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I really loved the style....and form of this write smile....I mean really loved it...
I always like a unique approach to these topics and not only that but you covered them all in one write.
You summed up life in three succinct and colorful terms...
I think Death O death might be more powerful as the third stanza but it certainly works as is.
Great job
allen
color choice of fonts work perfectly..as does the third stanza...Do we ever forget?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

10 Years Ago

Thank a lot Allen.. :)
I didn't knew, just sentences flowed out for those words...
Wel.. read more



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I really loved the style....and form of this write smile....I mean really loved it...
I always like a unique approach to these topics and not only that but you covered them all in one write.
You summed up life in three succinct and colorful terms...
I think Death O death might be more powerful as the third stanza but it certainly works as is.
Great job
allen
color choice of fonts work perfectly..as does the third stanza...Do we ever forget?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

10 Years Ago

Thank a lot Allen.. :)
I didn't knew, just sentences flowed out for those words...
Wel.. read more
Hmmm...I like the conversation aspect, it's a very nice touch I think. These are things I ask everyday ^-^ so it has actually depth and meaning for me which I find rare in a poem that is not of my own.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smilempsn

10 Years Ago

ThankU for the review and connecting to it Dark Artist..
Well even thought I wrote it for comp.. read more
A very nice poem. I like the conversation aspect in it too along with other things...Well penned...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Hahaha...lol
smilempsn

10 Years Ago

:P change except of these two also Sami ;)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

;)

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smilempsn

Delhi, India



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