SHE WAS A WITCH

wrote for a contest

SHE WAS A WITCH!!

 

Bewitched

Entered into her room

With a burning desire, inexplicable!!

Into my eyes she goggled

To touch her just to touch her

Craved my body and heart

Hot was her that charm in her eyes

Eyes aroused much the male who I am

Dubiously I paced towards her

 

B

Embraced her redolent figure

Waves of joy in thousands exploded

Imagine what can happen

Cries of ecstasy escaped

Heart pounded for more

Enforced to believe in pleasure,

Days and nights I spent with the witch.

 

B

End is inevitable for everything

Which began with a beginning.

Impaled by a relapse unexpected

There I lay stolen by her

Ceased by something I mistook for eternal

Heaves of a lost glory loomed around

Enthusiasm gave way to bitterness

Death seemed to be prowling around

 

B

End came like a fluke from sky

Witch came out from disguise

In my neck her kiss made a hole

Thrusting her form upon me

Cells of my blood she oozed out

Heart turned pale, slowed down.

Enigma like, my life dangled in air

Death dragged me from my body, my life.

 

B

End of an ending

What next?

In the heaven

There were angels

Celebrations

Holy days

Ecstasy in its real form

Do believe my words, my dear friends.

Reviews

[Randolf Ramos]

Great piece

[Rose Tyler]

Like Dinesh said, the Best acrostic poem I've come across yet. Keep writing! I'm sure you can do more amazing pieces like this one!

[Dinesh Sairam]

WOW.. There are the best sets of acrostic I've come across yet. Well done, Jeny. You truly deserve an ovation. *Clap clap*.. :) Keep writing.

[Dev]

Really cool. u know the "B"s you've left put Bewitched there. It'll look good.
Well written :)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

A good acrostic . Sounds like she was a vampire too!
This was sensual and a bit spooky.
I enjoyed it, Jeny.

Chloe

[Samantha Young]

I love how you began each line with a letter from the word, in order. It was great. Awesome poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

Witches and Angels. You create a wild and crazy poem. I like the set-up and the story in the poem. I don't what type ecstasy will be found on heaven? A very good poem.
Coyote

[Daniel Gardner]

You do great job with word poetry. Something i am not really good at. Great job and hope to read more from you.

[Holly O'Brien]

love it!...i loved the pattern and wording...there was a thought or emotion in every line

[Bette]

you did a great job on this.the set up is good.