NEVER

NEVER

A Poem by JENY
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a poem

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NEVER

 

Never touch

Where I never touched

A touch is enough

To break open the whole pain

 

Never kiss

Where I never kissed

A brush of lips is enough

To break open the whole passion

 

Never smile

When I never smiled

A smile is enough

To fan the fire of my longings..

 

Never smell

What I never smelled

A smell is enough

To wake up the animal in me

 

Never call

When I never called

Your voice is enough

To crumble the walls of my inhibitions

 

Never come

When I never came in front of you

A sight is enough

To break my mind into pieces

Pieces of unfulfilled hopes.


© 2011 JENY



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Oh wow! I really love this! I don't know if I'm right, but I feel this is about restrained love. Kinda like, don't give me a reason to love you. Love it!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


A clever poem exploring the aspects of never, with fine combinations like, "A brush of lips is enough/To break open the whole passion." The metaphor of pieces is excellent.

Posted 6 Years Ago


nice poem, jeny, filled with suppressed longing. Good work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


A amazing poem my writer friend. I like the feel of a old desire and memories in the poem. A hint of regret and need I feel inside the strong words. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Sometime we must hold on to the disappointments. That is all we have left.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Great write..!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is so creative!
I loved the ending!
"To break my mind into pieces
Pieces of unfulfilled hopes."
This is absolutely wonderful :)
Great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sadly beautiful, sometimes never is not forever..


Posted 6 Years Ago


Painful, and easy to read. Raw emotion and slight of hand with your wording, well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Like like like! there's nothing like good repetition in a poem:) thanks for sharing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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the repetition is strong..songlike..a strong sense of knowing

Posted 6 Years Ago



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