The Math

One plus One equals two?

Then how can it be, that you and I, have always equaled you?

Something's not right

It's never been fair

I gave you my heart

But you didn't care.

We walked down the path that others have 

We stared into each other's eyes.

We knew deep down it would always work out

But it's not possible when one of us lies.

I love you more than words can say

I love you with all of my heart.

Blah Blah Blah, Yakety Yak, what happened to death do us part?

But now the clouds have lifted, the sun has come back out

There is someone in my life right now, that I can't do without.

This person is so special and it took so long to see

I'm glad my eyes are finally open to the love inside of me!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"But now the clouds have lifted, the sun has come back out

There is someone in my life right now, that I can't do without.

This person is so special and it took so long to see

I'm glad my eyes are finally open to the love inside of me!"

I can't mathematically calculate how beautiful this poem is...Bravo

[smurfett]

Great play on words...lol..Love it Sami!! Thank you my friend..

[Sami Khalil]

It is indeed...You are welcome...:)

[Latifa]

Blah Blah Blah, Yakety Yak, what happened to death do us part?
really nice poem that has sort of romance plus humor

[smurfett]

Thank you for your read poet. ;-)

[Goodbye, find me at rob..]

One plus One equals two?
Then how can it be, that you and I, have always equaled you? (this is a hot line...love it!!!

[smurfett]

Thank you my friend!! much love to you!! xoxoxox

[Zainab UF]

What a lovely poem! I especially loved the math analogy. "Then how can it be.... equaled you?" revealed volumes about the dynamics of the relationship in question.

[smurfett]

Thank you for your comments!!

[zainul]

I guess that One plus One equals two now.

Wonderful write.

[smurfett]

Thank you so much my friend.....

[zainul]

You are always welcome.

[Jack Frost]

ha! love it, once again great ;P

[smurfett]

Thanks Jack!!

[Jack Frost]

but of course luv ;P