The Rain Escape

The Rain Escape
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I like it soft and humid
Rain drops pelting off my bare chest
The slickness�the moisture
On my strenuous overworked shoulders
Towel me off my dear�if you dare,
Or take a seat on my back as I cart you off into the forest-
A desirous location�only you and I could find
I will be at your service
The rain at mine,
To have you nice and wet
As I am already-
We are alone here
Your clothes aren�t keeping you dry-
Will you have the honors?
My zipper is caught.
Closer . . . closer
Our cheeks brush and I let down your hair
It is as if we�re in a shower, but no shower could be so sweet-
Our lips do touch-
And the Sun peaks through the treetops and gently graces our hidden locale
I�d like to stay with you here forever
You as my forest princess
And I as your forest knight,
The battles and demons I slay will be none other than the
Passion that exudes between us,
In our own little heaven.

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Our lips do touch-
And the Sun peaks through the treetops and gently graces our hidden locale
I'd like to stay with you here forever
You as my forest princess
And I as your forest knight,


Sounds like the perfect love getaway ~ Wonderfully penned and beautifully
espressed in poetic verse~THanks for submitting this to my Love Shack contest~Fran Marie

[Rainbowco]

Sultry, fluid, and just plain sensual. No wonder you won. Congrats.

[Wildfleour]

Very nice!

Congratulations on winning Fran's contest!

[Dani California]

Very sensual indeed!

whew.. my.

I could use a walk in the nice cool evening breeze...
yeah i think I'll do that. lol

This is full of passion and romance, I love it!
Excellent!

[emz]

Truly wondrous and sensual.... it almost makes the reader feel like they are there.... this is my favourite of yours so far... lovely well written and evocotive write



x

[Lily1111]

Romance has always been your friend hasn't it? What a lovely way to take a sensual shower with the one you love. I wouldn't be at all surprised if this really did occur.

[Heart Of A Wolf]

Aw, such delicious images. If only they were real.