Rip Shine

ripples in the water, ripples in the sand

look around everybody everywhere 

before the sun goes down

remember all the details, remember them well

when the days grow long and the nights grow still

when you believe in heaven

when you believe in hell

sip lemonade by the water fall, cool your soul

there's no such thing as growing too old

rebel, rebel, raise hell, dance scream yell

ripples in the water, ripples in the sand

look around everybody everywhere 

when the sun is down

time is never ending, time is never still

when days' too long and nights too chill

move through forest, through trembling trees

echoes of heart beats, waving of the leaves

believe in tomorrow, find your way home

sipping moonshine by the gates, dance as you go

look around everybody everywhere 

before the sun goes down

ripples in the water, ripples in the sand

dancing day or night, rip the ever shine

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Sea Wolf - "Black Leaf Falls"

Sea Wolf - "Winter Windows"

Sea Wolf - "Orion & Dog"

Author's Note

feedback appreciated. thanks

Reviews

[snickerdoodle]

thanks, if you have revisions suggestions for consideration, feel free to share them

[Between the grey]

I really like this, thought it was written well, and captured the feeling well.
Nice job here!