Trust Issues

Trust Issues

A Poem by C.C. Marx
"

the struggle to trust people these days, the struggle to know they won't betray you

"
Censoring my words
For certain prying ears
How can I be sure
Betrayal wont repeat itself
Some secrets
Aren't meant to be heard
And definitely not
Spread around
Things have a habit
Of coming full circle
Numerous times
It's come back to bite me
I try to stay
Within my own boundaries
Avoid lines
Not meant to be crossed
But if my foot
Steps over that line
How can I be sure
Your standards aren't double
Suspicious of everyone
Trusting no one.

© 2012 C.C. Marx



Author's Note

C.C. Marx
review please :P

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I don't trust certain people for jack s**t. They have the nerve to spread things around when they don't know what your life is like. I loved reading this. I can relate, but I think everyone has trust issues to a point. I mean what are people saying about you behind closed doors? That's what goes around in your mind. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

I don't trust her but I don't hats her its weird its more like I miss the person I thought she was n.. read more
Angie Diane♥♥

4 Years Ago

Yeah, I understand.
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Well I'm glad at least one of us can reconcile this holiday season! Although I'm not sure I would wa.. read more



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Ahh the problem with insecurity.... Know yourself, be true to that core and stand tall....

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Wise words my friend, thanks for the review!!
I bet everyone can relate :P

'But if my foot
Steps over that line
How can I be sure
Your standards aren't double"

Are my favorite sentences xD
Haha mind if I put this in my favorite library? :P

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

I would probably dance a happy dance and fist pump cuz that would make my day, thanks for reviewing!.. read more
I can definitely relate to this poem, I have trust issues too. People who I tried to become friends have let me down so much, and I find it hard to be positive about society. It just seems like so many people are fake nowadays; they'll act like they're interested in you when they're really not. "How can I be sure your standards aren't double" was my favorite line. You put the topic of trust issues in words really well, awesome job :]

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing!! Trust issues trust issues we all got them some worse than others, thanks agai.. read more
WHOA. DUDE. SEXY.
AND BY SEXY I MEAN AWESOME.
SORRY.
lol so anywayses, this is very relateable. It applies to certain people *glares at certain people* in my life, which made it all the more sexy.
By which I mean awesome.
Sorry.

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

A sect poem, well there's a first time for everything. I'm glad you can find it relatable ok maybe n.. read more
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

*sexy
Admiral Kirk

4 Years Ago

Haha, yeah lol. :P You're welcome!!! :D
I don't trust certain people for jack s**t. They have the nerve to spread things around when they don't know what your life is like. I loved reading this. I can relate, but I think everyone has trust issues to a point. I mean what are people saying about you behind closed doors? That's what goes around in your mind. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

I don't trust her but I don't hats her its weird its more like I miss the person I thought she was n.. read more
Angie Diane♥♥

4 Years Ago

Yeah, I understand.
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Well I'm glad at least one of us can reconcile this holiday season! Although I'm not sure I would wa.. read more
This is really good! I have trust issues too

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Oh goodness not you too! Lol its ok about a million people in the world can agree with you there tha.. read more
Lover Of Words

4 Years Ago

Your welcome
Wow, this is really good! Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
s y e

4 Years Ago

Your very welcome! (:
nicely done

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
succinct and to the point, while both being very well put and seemingly incredibly accurate to what you must be feeling. not a word is wasted. very well done, sir.

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by though your compliment is not completely accurate (not a boy)
Francis Danger

4 Years Ago

HA. i apologize! i just read, i didn't see the poetry. well, if anything, that shows your writing it.. read more
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

No sweat it has happened a couple times on here (the whole two initial thing often confuses people)
Its so hard to build or try to trust when all you have experienced has been deceit but this is good and bad for now days everyone just about it seems to have a agenda or scheme to get over on you nice read here as always keep writing

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

It really is you're always wondering "can I trust them?" I bottle things up because its just easier.. read more

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