Mrs. Popularity

Mrs. Popularity

A Poem by C.C. Marx
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just a little vented frustration

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Such superficial aspirations
They plague you my dear
Tell me darling
Is your mind lonely?
No penny for a thought
For you cannot pay for nothing
Your imagination
So predictable and stereotypical
So dull and lacking
Much like your personality
Oh how you poke fun
At the unique and different
Though they have
The courage to be an original
Dear Barbie incarnate
I only wish to share the truth
You are as interesting as
The plastic doll you resemble.

© 2012 C.C. Marx



Author's Note

C.C. Marx
Review please!! (ps if you are a popular, good for you. This was not meant to offend, just poking a little fun a some girls I know)

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Great job my friend

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Thank you girly xx
Ahaha! This kind of tickled my funnies. Especially the "cannot pay for nothing" part. No thoughts, no pennies. :P It's true, though. There's a few of those girls in every crowd...

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Glad to be of service! Ha I wouldn't write that if there wasnt some proof
I can't stop laughing! I loved this poem because, well, there are some girls in my school that I absolutely hate and this sums them up PERFECTLY. Anyway, as for criticism, the line, "for you cannot pay for nothing," is grammatically incorrect. You should have the word anything instead of nothing, unless you meant to use slang. Anyhow, love the poem!

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Don't I know it! Those lovely girls were my inspiration haha thanks for the critism it does sound a .. read more
Riley Bray

4 Years Ago

No problem, thanks for making me laugh!
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

My pleasure, thanks for letting me be the person to do it :)
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Very, very good piece, I applaud you.
This is fantastic, and into my favorites it goes! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Awww thank you! and also thanks for the review :)
Toni

4 Years Ago

No problem :-)
Well deserved!
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Aww :)
Never gave a damn about being popular or looking like anyone but me. We all want to be attractive but when unrealistic examples of "perfection" cause young women to starve themselves we have a problem. Love yourself as you are!!! Beauty comes from personality and your heart. Very good poem!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

I've seen every stereotype you can make, the wannabes, the queen bees, the fakers, the drama queens,.. read more
redflutterby

4 Years Ago

Lol...one would think so!! :-) and you're welcome.
OMG!

Loved this! Fabbydoo poem girl!

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Shmancks darling, enjoy the sass ;)
s y e

4 Years Ago

Haha, sassy C.C ;-) Da bestest
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Some people deserve that sass!! I wouldn't say anything if it wasnt warranted
I also know girls like this and some of them could definitely use a reality check :) Fun, sassy poem, I like it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Don't I know it girl!! They need a nice slap in the face with reality haha thanks for the review
This is a profound write and a well and interesting piece,
Barbies are Mary Sues right? someone that popular might've been so perfect

Posted 4 Years Ago


Rhianne Ney

4 Years Ago

Mary Sue are very perfect individuals that you can never relate to them
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

I see so in a way yes, except the perfection isn't really perfection it's the stereotyped version! T.. read more
Rhianne Ney

4 Years Ago

You're welcome and my pleasure (:
Ahaha! This is genius. Guess this is intentionally made for married women because of the tile although Barbie could be anyone else regardless of status. This is going into my favorites:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Awwww thank you!!! You can take it as that or those girls who are fake not only appearance wise with.. read more
Dear Barbie incarnate
I only wish to share the truth
You are as interesting as
The plastic doll you resemble.

This is so powerful...I know many teenage girls...and some Orange County housewives that truly need to read this!

Posted 4 Years Ago


C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Why thank you, those orange country wives could use a wake call don't they?
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

yes indeed! Even Barbie won't look good on botox at age 80!
C.C. Marx

4 Years Ago

Nope even Barbie is jealous of their plastic faces ;)

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