My teacher Ms.L

My teacher Ms.L

A Poem by Akshita
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Well, a malicious poem about a teacher of mine!

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My teacher Ms.L

My teacher Ms.L

Comes dressed up really well,

Moves about like an angel

Don’t you get fooled by her.

 

My teacher Ms.L,

Does not eat really well;

For she’s tall and lean,

With blue eyes that look really keen;

But don’t you get deceived by her!

 

Because when my teacher Ms.L,

Is asked a doubt, she is hell!

With her cheap make-up cracking clean,

Her blue eyes looking really mean;

Told you not to get deceived by her!

 

For how she got her job,

Is a mystery no one yet has solved;

Cause she doesn’t know a word,

Regarding history, geography, let alone literature!

 

She rants and raves;

Throws the book on,

The poor child’s face;

Turns pink to purple, purple to red;

Says, “Don’t you dare ask a question,

For there is nothing I could tell!”


© 2016 Akshita



Author's Note

Akshita
My dear friends, please excuse the impertinence of this poem! My humble apologies to all of you in advance.

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Haha! Anyone can just replace Ms. L and get their own characters they faced in life and it will still be true and will make sense to write these words.

Well done.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Akshita

10 Months Ago

Thanks! : )
Haha...this poem reminds me one of my teacher....
Your writings are started to inspiring me....
Good job...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Akshita

1 Year Ago

You give such sweet reviews! Thanks a lot!
I enjoyed the premise of this poem. A disgruntled teacher who is as mean as her keen eyes and dumb as her cheap make-up. I think its worded nicely. But I couldn't help notice how uninspiring the poem was.

I believe you could do more to make it seem more thrilling, cause I think from the start I sorta knew the directions were it was headed. We all have that one teacher like her, but seldom are they as dumb as portrayed in your poem.

But then again, maybe that was exactly what you were going for. A dumb, possibly anorexic teacher. If that is the case, kudos. A good read nonetheless. Keep writing.

P.s. I think the impertinence is excused, regardless of if you tell us in advance or not. Being a writer gives you that liberty to sometimes tow that thin line.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Akshita

1 Year Ago

Thanks such a lot for your review. I sincerely value your criticism. And believe me, such teachers r.. read more
Mifa

1 Year Ago

Lol. I see. No problemo then. Good riddance to their terrible rubbish, it is.
I'm reading your second poem...your writing inspires me to write some poem...pls do help me with some tips to start :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Akshita

1 Year Ago

Oh! I would love to! But you know I hardly know anything about poetry. So I cannot give you any prop.. read more
Aayisha Parveen

1 Year Ago

That's fine! Please can you review my first brginner poem "Listen To Me"
Akshita

1 Year Ago

Of course!
I'm reading your second poem...your writing inspires me to write some poem...pls do help me with some tips to start :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Double dare you to print it out and drop it in on her desk :p

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

1 Year Ago

Yeah! So that they throw me out of school.
Satan

1 Year Ago

Strong willed and not stupid. Keep it up.
Akshita

1 Year Ago

Thank you! : )
She has more than one cover up. lol

Posted 1 Year Ago


Akshita

1 Year Ago

She sure does! : )
Good words dude. I enjoyed this poem because it reminds me of one of my teachers back in the day. Lol but not all the same XD

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

1 Year Ago

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! : )
Nice one dear.... Seem Ur teacher doesn't like to answer Ur questions :-P

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

1 Year Ago

Thanks!!! It is not that she doesn't like answering, it is just that she usually doesn't know the a.. read more
I hope Ms L first learns then teaches

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

1 Year Ago

I hope so too! :)
harry gharial

1 Year Ago

:) hhaha gud job

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