Not good enough!

Not good enough!

A Poem by Akshita
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About all the snobs and know-it-alls! : )

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Not good enough!

Oh! He says I’m not good enough...

To match him and his ways!

So he just can’t hang around,

With someone, as useless as me.

 

I just stare at him wondering,

Why he is being such a know-it-all;

After all, he has not achieved anything great,

And then, won’t his attitude lead to his fall?

 

He leaves me in confusion,

Doubt and despair line my mind;

I doubt whether I should try again,

Or leave it all behind.


© 2016 Akshita



Author's Note

Akshita
Am I really turning into a serious person? I cannot write anything but serious poetry these days! : )

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why so serioussss........sssssorry couldn't resist.
being serious is not so bad...........otherwise i would have been in therapy.......that is going by my writings......
enough chit-chat.....

you have described a sad reality.......
honest and personal write........

leaving it all behind would be a good decision.

i really liked it!!!
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review!!! : )
Pushkar Prabhat

1 Year Ago

you are welcome........!!! :) :)



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Glad i came across this poem. i really like it thanks for sharing your talent.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


sometimes, the love or the so-called infatuation be seemed more like a dilemma of life that brings nothing but a loath of emptiness to hearts. kinda like these given lines:

I just stare at him wondering,
Why he is being such a know-it-all;
After all, he has not achieved anything great,
And then, won’t his attitude lead to his fall?

only a guy who hasn't yet achieved anythin' in life is seemed to be more typical and complex than the rest of the hot guys around esp. when it comes to love cos, he thinks, he's the one to nail things down around, but in real, he's the only one to be fooled around by his own mis-deception.

b'coz....
only a guy can leave a gurl in confusion who's himself a loath of self-obsessed deception of mind. a very new-age type poetry you've penned down in words. it's kinda story of every new youth who be trudgin' throu' the same analogies of life but in a very diff. way. nice imagery here, perhaps, very heartfelt, though.. as well.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Nothing to worry about. Yes, when in pain and despair only the victim knows better but each and every person in this world is unique and have different qualities, likes and dislikes.
It may not work out when you are with the wrong match and that may lead to fights or arguments.
I believe destiny brings the correct person in your life or sometimes both wants each other and adjusts to each others likes and dislikes.

Just keep fingers crossed, be positive and things will be alright.


Posted 10 Months Ago


Akshita

10 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for your encouraging review!
tanmay7551

10 Months Ago

You are most welcome!
Wow, Just wow, I am stunned. I loved it. Very nicely written. Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job. Keep up the outstanding work.


Posted 11 Months Ago


Akshita

11 Months Ago

Thanks!!!!
Ayushi Beura

11 Months Ago

Welcome :)
Its rare that a poem as simple as this can be such a fun read. It flowed well. Was short too. I am assuming its a relationship related poem... is it?
Writing simple is not that easy... U seemed to have cracked that.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Akshita

1 Year Ago

Actually,no. None of my poems are relationship related. And thanks a lot! : )
A poem about the arrogance of mankind, and you managed to capture the essence of it: Of how they try to push you down so they'd feel like they stand above you.

"won’t his attitude lead to his fall?" indeed I believe so. It will be their own arrogance that won't even consider how mortal and frail they - and we - all are, until they mortality of humanity is all we'll have left to feel.

Great poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

1 Year Ago

Thank you so...so much for your interesting review! : )
How he sustain without me
I know he nothing have without me
My soul is around his
This is so difficult for me
How I sustain also without him

Nice poem be continue

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

1 Year Ago

That is a nice continuation to the poem!
why so serioussss........sssssorry couldn't resist.
being serious is not so bad...........otherwise i would have been in therapy.......that is going by my writings......
enough chit-chat.....

you have described a sad reality.......
honest and personal write........

leaving it all behind would be a good decision.

i really liked it!!!
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review!!! : )
Pushkar Prabhat

1 Year Ago

you are welcome........!!! :) :)
had a laugh cos they are everywhere. an entertaining write on people we love to forget!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Akshita

1 Year Ago

: ) thank you for your review!
Such people are not worth thinking about. Move ahead. it is they who have a problem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Akshita

1 Year Ago

Thanks such a lot for your review!

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