the sun and the dew

the sun and the dew

A Poem by Somiena
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This is dedicated to someone who shall be known only as J. It gives a view into how my brain functions (or fails to do so) when J is around.

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you are the sun,

my thoughts the droplets

of dew on the petals

of blossoming flowers;

when you are present

my thoughts evaporate

and when you are gone

my thoughts return

and grow in number

until once again

we are together

© 2013 Somiena



Author's Note

Somiena
keep in mind that it is 3am and I haven't had a decent night's sleep in months. other than that, please, have at it

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i really enjoyed this :) well done, ladybro!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lucy Morningstar ♥

3 Years Ago

well, think of it this way... "today was good, today was fun, tomorrow is another one; (dr, seuss).... read more
Somiena

3 Years Ago

yeah, I just find it funny that the description in my poem can be taken in a really cutesy way, but .. read more
Lucy Morningstar ♥

3 Years Ago

huzza!!! xD
Have at what this is great. Though my opinion might be biased.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Somiena

3 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad someone likes it :D

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Added on November 8, 2013
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Tags: love, romance, J, thoughts, metaphors, what do I even tag?, personal

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Somiena
Somiena

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Not that it matters, but I'm 22 and I live in Canada. I don't write as much as I used to (not sure why), but if I do get back into writing, it'll likely be posted here first. You may also find me o.. more..

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