giving up

giving up

A Poem by Somiena
"

I have a lot of feelings and nowhere else to put them.

"
all the love
i should have for myself
is going somewhere else
but there wasn't enough
for me to be sharing to begin with
not without getting some in return
not without someone to love me back

and i know that i
shouldn't let myself
keep falling for you
but to be quite honest
it's not my choice to feel this way
i wish i could control myself
i wish i could not feel these things

sometimes i wonder
what i did to deserve
all the pain of loving you
but i wouldn't give it up
because you are amazing and
there's nothing i would trade
there's nothing i would change

so tell me i'm naïve
tell me i'm a fool
and i wish that i could
but i can't disagree
not when i know it's the truth
i can't keep lying to myself
i can't keep trying; i give up

© 2013 Somiena



Author's Note

Somiena
there is little in the way of grammar or punctuation. i realize this. i don't care. it's the words and the meaning that i'm trying to convey.

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"sometimes i wonder

what i did to deserve

all the pain of loving you

but i wouldn't give it up

because you are amazing and

there's nothing i would trade

there's nothing i would change"


We sure do wonder and ask questions...Bravo...............

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"sometimes i wonder

what i did to deserve

all the pain of loving you

but i wouldn't give it up

because you are amazing and

there's nothing i would trade

there's nothing i would change"


We sure do wonder and ask questions...Bravo...............

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh ladybro...this is amazing! you know...j should be kicking himself right now for not having an amazing girl like you :)


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Somiena

4 Years Ago

you don't even know him but thank you both :P this is why I love you guys
Lucy Morningstar ♥

4 Years Ago

awwwww ladybro...youre awesome :)
Somiena

4 Years Ago

d'awww yay :3

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Added on November 12, 2013
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Somiena
Somiena

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Not that it matters, but I'm 22 and I live in Canada. I don't write as much as I used to (not sure why), but if I do get back into writing, it'll likely be posted here first. You may also find me o.. more..

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