Guess I am dumb

Guess I am dumb

A Poem by sonceotrok
"

Sometimes its dumb to be dumb

"


I guess I,m dumb,
Are you dumb too?
Really-weely dumb?

Huh?

I mean--its a dumb world,
And dumb is a dumb word
But its not a bad word?

Whatever!

My dog is dumb,
His name is Dumbo,
He thinks I am Rambo!!!

Bow-wow!

I got a tongue,
I aint too deaf,
I am young.

(wink-wink)



So dumb,
So so dumb,
To call me dumb!

Clever!

© 2011 sonceotrok


Author's Note

sonceotrok
give me your dumb comments
and i will mutely thank you

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You got style, kid.

Posted 11 Years Ago


sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

Thanku Sandbox sir im am tryin
Thanks for making me smile, I feel this way often. In the morning b4 coffee, and after work. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

Have another coffe on me Muse thanku
I like this, it has character

Posted 12 Years Ago


sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

I am happy you find the character in my lil piece Droll
Lol this was funny.
"I got a tongue,
I aint too deaf,
I am young.
(wink-wink)"
My favorite part haha XP

Posted 12 Years Ago


sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

U fav part is mine too nonsense:) thanku
Very good! This made me laugh.
Very cute write and insightful
at the same time. Shows different
perspectives of the word and meaning,
as well as how you use it as a pronoun.
Cute write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

i am not too much into grammar but i like your review and i hope to like you:) thanku olivia
Ahaha, funny.

Posted 12 Years Ago


sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

hahah lexys thanku
I think this is cute, and insightful all at the same time.

It's like ones perception of the "word" and it's for ever changing form

Which I think makes this a grand write Hugs, AnnaMaria.

Posted 12 Years Ago


sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

hugs to u 2 Ana thankuyou pretty woman
I got confused....maybe I am dumb!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


sonceotrok

11 Years Ago

its confusing too...when i was dumb...now i am dumbest at WC...thanku Suki

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Added on June 13, 2011
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