grief

it took me about, seven or eight months,

it was hard but it had to happen.

i never realized how much i loved you,

i really did love you inside.

when some one you love but not may know goes away,

it hurts.

i didn't know you in person, but i loved you as a heart.

they say when someone you loved dies,

there are seven stages of grief.

1.SHOCK & DENIAL

2.PAIN & GUILT

3.ANGER & BARGAINING

4."DEPRESSION", REFLECTION, LONELINESS

5.THE UPWARD TURN

6. RECONSTRUCTION & WORKING THROUGH

7. ACCEPTANCE & HOPE

i think that i've been through them,

but now i feel like i have to see you.

i miss you so much that your name is on my arm.

it didn't hurt as much as when you left the world.

millions or billions,

generations of people,

every country, every race,

they all loved you.

when did it all go wrong?

it didn't.

it was all the hate and media.

now your remembered forever.Always.

when you tell your children, and children's children, 

about one man.

one man who changed the world,

a new light will shine.

i will miss you forever, 

i will remember you forever.

"...if You Wanna Make The World
A Better Place
Take A Look At Yourself And
Then Make A Change..."

Reviews

[Mia]

I loved this poem, you arranged it very nicely. I especially love the last line:
"...if You Wanna Make The World
A Better Place
Take A Look At Yourself And
Then Make A Change..."

It really sparks feeling. Excellent job!

[Liz-z]

What a lovely poem, really! I loved it... It was also written in a way you don't always see, amazing! :) And on top of that all it's a true and relative topic!
Favorite lines:
"There are seven stages of grief
..."
Beautiful.
And from there one it was absolutely beautiful! Loved it!

[soniix]

thanxx.. and it is ok if u enjoyed it... i know that many people in the world may feel the same in some way but in the back of your mind you still feel like your the only one...

thank you all for the reviews ..

[Unloved_kitty]

I agree with Katie =D
This is really good
~x~

[Midnight_Mask]

I'm blown away. Just speechless. Deep, deep emotions and a sadness longing that everyone can relate to. would it be bad if I said I enjoyed it? considering its about pain.
Good write.
Keep it up! =D

[Abdul Aziz]

Amazing. You have a very unique style of writing. The pain is very palpable in the very words you have chosen to express it. Very sad, but a beautiful poem.