no hope at the bottom.

this is about a person who is just completed isolated in nothing. theres no light, no thought, no hope.

why do i feel so cold?

my emotions are still,

my breath stays at a hold,

i feel no love, no pain,

just hate.

the day seems happy and cheery,

the people are merry and well,

but ... i can't see it.

my eyes are black,

i see no light, no colour, no lives.

i'm just thinking with no feeling, 

no emotion, 

no thought.

my heart feels heavy as a sun, 

that dense core just becoming heavier.

the story about Pandora's box.

there was hope left at the bottom,

well there is no hope for me now.

so i guess i'll just stay down.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I like the way this poem is writen. The feeling of a heavy and lonely burden comes across on this piece, as well as something else I can't quite put to words... perhaps the term "forgotten" might come close, but it's more robust than that.
Either way. This was a really great work of ink! It's the kind that makes you feel and think.

Wolfie