YOU CAN'T HURT ME!

All of my hate cannot be found,
I will not be drowned by your thoughtless scheming.
So you can try to tear me now,
Beat me to the ground.
I will see you screaming.

This time taking it away, I've got a problem,
With me getting in the way, my violent side.
So I take my face, and bash it into a mirror.
I won't have to see the pain, pain, pain.

All my friends are gone, 

they died,
They all screamed, 

and cried. 

My life, worry, lifeless story,
Give up beating
I'll start bleeding.

Now I see the times they change,
Leaving us, it seems so strange.
I am hoping that I can find,
Where to leave my hurt behind.
All the s**t I seem to take,
All alone I seem to break,
I have lived the best I can,
Does this make me insane?

Reviews

[Mia]

This is a great poem. It really expresses your anger. I love how it's set up in a rhyming pattern, normally it's really hard to write emotional poems that rhyme, but you did a great job! You're really good at expressing your anger through writing, it would be awesome to see some of your poems get published one day! Keep up the awesome writing!

Mia

[Liz-z]

Wow, the powerful confidence, I love it! The anger, happens to be a bonus! Truly love your painful descriptions, and confidence in this poem!
Favorite lines:
"I will not be drowned by your thoughtless scheming"
Beautiful and strong line. This is what caught my attention first.
"I have lived the best I can,
Does this make me insane?"
I don't think so, I think it makes you a braver person, someone who's strong, and who is willing to move on with life... Bravo!
Really good poem. :D

[soniix]

they are actually lyrics but i didn't know what to click as the type of writing... but the genre id lyrics :D

[Dinesh Sairam]

This is more like the words that spill out of anger. But poetry is the kid of profoundness and peace.. well almost. Anger can be expressed in poetry too. But, it has to have that 'Naive' and 'Tender' touch somewhere - It has to have the poetic feel embedded to it. Anger just splashed all over the write doesn't make it look too good. All I can say is, this poem is good. I can't say anything better, I'm really sorry.

Maybe, this will sound perfect if put in music. But I'm very poor at it and can't imagine a tune.

But keep writing and that's what makes you better by the day.