the call...

ring, ring

ring, ring,

(pick up)

...hello...

... who is it...

.. sorry, from where?!...

...no, im his sister can i take a message...

...what?!...

...are you sure...

...omg!...

...is he okay??...

...when did it happen?...

...last night, but how?...

...omg...

...thank you for telling me...

...bye...

(hang up)

what happened to him??

what was her reaction??

your imagination might make you think one thing which may not actually be the case.

was the person upset about something?? OR deep down really happy and relived??

was the person shocked and surprised OR just putting on a face??

sounds and looks may be deceiving.

Reviews

[Mia]

Wow, nice job! I've never seen a poem like this before, it's really interesting. Maybe you could write another part or something, maybe from the other person's point of view. That would be neat to see!

Mia

[Pikachu]

whoa ive never seen this style before hmm unique it leaves us hanging off the cliff

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

distinctive and unique poetic pattern~ the conversation set up a scene~ the questions that follow engage the reader in an interactive moment that truly connects writer to reader and the write~ high quality original piece!~ well done~