your not blood.

heyy... i think i finished it... im soo angry and mad in here!!!.. :P

AARRGGGG!!!!.... i just can't be bothered anymore.

you always talk crap, 

you always say i answer back.

no one can talk to you because your so ignorant.

i hate the crap out of you!

just hearing your name makes me sick,

it makes me want to throw up my insides.

your not blood, 

i bet when you were born, that the nurses swapped you,

that wouldn't be the worst thing that has happened with you.

why do i HATE you so much?

when i see you,

i want to kill you or myself.

when i hear you,

i want to hide and die.

when i smell you,

i want to cut off my nose and bleed.

voices in my head, 

they scream, they shout, 

they drive me crazy!

i just want to be left alone, isolated in my room.

but you still keep coming in.

if this keeps going on, 

i swear that i'll be the one that takes your last breath away.

i can't keep living like this,

your not blood,

your not nothing,

your dead to me!

Reviews

[sammyj]

wow good job

[Unloved_kitty]

This poem is full of emotion, it really shows how angry you are.
Nice write !
Keep it up !

[Tony]

You've created the embodiment of sibling rivalry at it's uttermost peak on high! The synergistic language creates a nitro powered jackhammer pulmelling the reader with pure unadulterated energy! Wow, I feel invigorated. Aarrgg!! Great work.

[Mia]

Wow, this poem is full of anger, I can really see it. My only concern would be that gramatical errors, only because those often turn people away from reading a poem. But, on the other hand, this a great poem, you really expressed your anger. I can't wait to see more from you, you're a really great writer. Plus, you live in England (I'm a Harry Potter freak, so I'm totally jealous), that makes me want to be YOU!!!!
Can't wait to see more from you!

Mia

[Liz-z]

Wow, one of the angriest poem I've read... Amazing job... Really expressed your anger beautifully.
:) It also shows tuns of frustration... Which I'm pretty sure everyone's felt!
Favorite lines:
"You always talk crap,
You always say I answer back"
I've been through something like this... and trust me, I know how it feels to be so annoyed by the crap people talk, excellent job!
And as for the last verse, wow, there is all that anger you write so well! :D
Amazing poem!