Inevitably

i have NO CLUE where this came from...

That demon
with a dress of flame
and hair the color of gold
and skin of bronze
and eyes red and with no shame

 The flames
the tendrils
of gold and blue
and red and orange
reached out and grabbed you

They sucked you in
the demon
so seductive she is
promising you a warm place in her heart
with you next to her bosom
that wasn't smart

she may be fire
but I am Ice
I will not melt
I will not break
under her searing grip
of dizzying pain
revenge!
I will have it!
My hair of silver
and dress of blue
skin of white
dazzle you

I have transformed
an angel now
this is a battle
of fire and ice
of angels and demons
of love and lust
of hatred and just

we clash
and battle
and fight
fire
inevitably
melts ice.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a good poem from a talented young poet.I love the line I have transformed an angel now,a line with two images of transformation and angelicness that really complement each other.And the use of opposed images like fire and ice is well done.Good work.

[Bridger Hall]

this is so sick. I thought of the song misery business by paramore. I dont know if that has any relevance. But yea. Haha. Way good. You should turn this into a book.

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Mast hai! .... I enjoyed reading it..... Quite nicely done..... The starting of course was the best...

[ATG]

A very interesting and well written poem. Although the poem works well figuratively, I found it more interesting to take it literal. Overall it was a good poem.

[Courtney Taylor]

haha...bosom....jkjk it was reallyyy good

[Archia]

I really liked this, there was just something about it, that made me like it. I enjoyed the contrasts with ice and fire, and then how the end sums it up.

[bethany cullen]

loved the little bit that said of love and lust or fire and just " goood writing :)

[Adalynn]

Great write. I loved reading it

Adalynn

[TheSweet]

This is a very different piece, I like it. The opposition of fire and ice is age old, and this keeps a comparison with you fighting deamons, good vs bad. It seems to have a fair few themes in it. It's deeper than in looks, so It gets my vote :) Thanks for sharing.

[Melinda Weber]

I liked this piece, there were parts where i stumbled and lost the flow, but found my feet again :) To me, this could come across as an inner battle within oneself. Overall, good write .