The Words I Didn't Say

About a girl and a guy friend drifting apart even though she'sin love with him

All those words I never said

(really there's only three)

Swirling around in my head

trying to break free

I (love) miss you

Please (kiss me) come back

(I want to hold your hand)

want to be your friend again

But now you're gone

(I'm trying to move on)

but I still (love you) am your friend

Don't let this be the end

(Can't it be the beginning?)

Can't it be the beginning?

I miss you.

(I want to kiss you.)

Author's Note

reviews please!

Reviews

[Deandra Dawn]

I love this...you did an amazing job.

[Chrishauna Thompson]

This is beautiful i love it.!

[emman]

sooooooooooooooooooooo sweet..mwah mwah..hehe :)

[Manda]

The parentheses really put an emphasis on what we all would like to say, but are held up by our own insecurities. Nicely phrased, and the visual aspect of the unspoken truth makes it all the more powerful.

[Kelsy]

Those words we don't say,might be the ones that really matter.Nice and beautiful!

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully captured. The want of past regrets so eloquently said.

[Coyote Poetry]

The words not said haunt us. A powerful poem with a good message. It is good to express love when the emotion is strong and real. I like the flow and the set-up of the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

Really nice. I like how you (put these) around the words you didn't say :)

But now you're gone
(I'm trying to move on)
but I still (love you) am your friend
Don't let this be the end

Love that part ^

[Virtuosa X]

This explains so perfectly what I'm feeling right now. Nicely done.

[MandaBear]

sweet and bittersweet at the same time. very nice job. Sometimes you wish you could have said what you didn't. great job :)