But, being a teenager,

But, being a teenager,

A Poem by Sophie

One popular,

one not,

one 'ugly'

one 'hot.'


I'm the loser,

the one who doesn't fit in,

You're the Queen,

the one with too many friends.


You complain

about your boyfriend breaking up with you.

I don't

because I've never had a boyfriend to complain to.


Maybe you should try my life,

if yours is so bad,

walk a mile in my shoes,

see if you still feel sad.


My life isn't bad, I know

but being a teenager,

I don't really care, though.

I'll complain anyway,

wish life away,

because neither side is greener.

(even though you are meaner.)


But I still

wish you could feel

this pain, so real

What's it like being invincible?

Try being invisible.

© 2012 Sophie


Author's Note

Sophie
the lasts stanza popped into my head, so I went with it

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I like the last stanza. good job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


God, I can relate to this...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I can relate to this poem completely and most definitely so many others can. This is one of my favorite poems that you have written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some people really complain about the opportunities and chances they have when others have nothing and can still live with satisfaction. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


But I still
wish you could feel
this pain, so real
What's it like being invincible?
Try being invisible.

Love love love this stanza. High school is tough, but once you`re out of it, you`ll laugh at how stupid everyone was in it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The third stanza reminds me of one of my bestfriends

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

if u r just 14........ur writings r really awesome.u cant be just 14

Posted 11 Years Ago


its really awesome

Posted 11 Years Ago


hey u just have some awesome ideas..........i love reading ur poems...........thanx fr writing such lovely things

Posted 11 Years Ago


Not care about what others think, their opinion or what they do, will always help to gain wisdom. Such a good poem #Love it

Posted 11 Years Ago



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