I love you

I love you

A Poem by Tahna

Hello Hello

Don't you know

You can't go

I need to know

If you love me so

 

Because I can see

Infront of me

A man of mystery

I dream wishfully

That you'll say to me

"I love you, baby."

 

Because every day

I never say...

Because the words just float away

 

The words are on my lips

You never kiss

Won't it be bliss

When you finally say

"I love you"

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2011 Tahna


Author's Note

Tahna
another write late at night...
Ps the pic has nothing to do with the poem its just a cute boy hehe

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this is so great and nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was good, it could be part of a song. Good job! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel it is more inclined towards the shelf of self help and dire need, a flow of ease and vale, well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

some part of it could be a parts of song , that because of the soft music that u hear while reading it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tahna
Tahna

New Zealand



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