Ink & tears.

Ink & tears.

A Story by Spacecadet
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Another addition to the tiny tale series.

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"But it's not with you anymore, he stole it"
Her mind whispered.
"I can feel it pulsating through my body. Each beat reminds me that I'm alive, even though I'm not really alive, without him"
She sighed as her finger traced the tattoo of a hollow heart on her wrist.

© 2014 Spacecadet


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Spacecadet
A story in a few lines. I hope you'll like it!

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pensive musing, you have constructed the reduction of oneness eloquently.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Spacecadet

9 Years Ago

Thank you, I seemed to have achieved what I was aiming for :)
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I can relate to this. It hurts when your not with the one who holds your heart.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

God knows, its one of the worst kinds of pain.
ron

10 Years Ago

I know it is. Big hugs
sad, thoughtful... broken .... lovely write

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

Thanks Bowers :)
Melancholy and wishful. A dusting of hope.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

Broken hope.. Thanks for the review!
Chris

10 Years Ago

Broken happens ...a lot. It IS a minefield as we walk within a relationship. Many are at no fault .. read more
Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

Beautifully put, Chris :)
At least we're introduced to the survivor inside of us along the wa.. read more
Lol! Yeah, I like this one and even last line makes me laugh! I love watching angels with "Tattoos" not bunch of tattoos on whole body but a one tattoo like on her waits or on her back side of neck something like that. Anyway, leave it!

I really enjoy the story or a tale series, what all I gotta suggest you to make you help out is "If you do write stories then try stretching 'em lengthwise" because #stories need an average strength ...like for an example, you can write short stories in 700 words, bit one in 1500 words and much more. but i'd suggest you to write stories in between 1000-1500 words cause it's a great strength to me.

The title's very nice, "Ink and tears" it's filled with emotions. And the short story tale showed how beautiful your heart is cause your short write is a combination of love and emotions and of course feelings of your heart too.

Keep up the great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lots of emotion in just a few lines, another great write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Oh sweet love, how bitter you can be. What you have written is something we all know too well. Good write! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

Bitter sweet it is! Thanks for the review :)
Sad musings about lost love .Well penned my friend :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

Thanks Vidya!
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Nice and gentle poem. keep on the good work

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Gentle reminiscences of a lost love and a broken heart that speak loudly, you told an entire story in so few poignant sentiments here Spacecadet. Nicely pen'd. :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

Thanks Frieda! Your reviews are always much appreciated :)

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Added on March 5, 2014
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Tags: Heart, stolen, whispers, missing, tattoo

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I'm a student, moody writer and keen discoverer of soulful writing. Everything I write is right from my heart. Being a hopeless romantic, my favorite genre to read and write is romance. Heartbreak mak.. more..

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