Worlds Apart

Worlds Apart

A Poem by Spacecadet
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Don't forget to breathe.

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Worlds Apart

Stop for a second and look to the sky, my darling
The crystalline stars burn so bright for you
They speak the words I never could
They sing the song in your heart,
The one we wrote together

Stop for a second and take a breath, my darling
This life is not a fight
You chase the finish line of a race you run alone
Don't leave me behind in the dust

Stop for a second and close your eyes, my darling
Let the promises we whispered echo
In the depths of your soul
And we'll pretend our hearts didn't drown
Trying to swim the oceans that separate us.

© 2014 Spacecadet


Author's Note

Spacecadet
This is for those of us that tend to forget the simplicity of the things that make us happy.

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Yes, simplicity's the real mirror of our reflection. Simplicity's our both insider and outsider beauty. I love ..even I do adore this poem because the marvelous crimson red colors dispersing the aroma of love into the hearts via your pretty impressive poetic words. Sometimes, it's so better to look to the sky and pen down some words with the heart ..letting the pain go into the ashes and living the live with reality, singing to a song. Lovely poem. You give me new perceptive to look to the sky indeed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Raj
Nice poem.theme won which it is written is really good. I like the lines
"Stop for a second and close your eyes, my darling
Let the promises we whispered echo
In the depths of your soul
And we'll pretend our hearts didn't drown
Trying to swim the oceans that separate us."


Posted 9 Years Ago


Spacecadet

9 Years Ago

Thanks Raj :)
I really enjoyed this. Beauty in simplicity. Nicely penned!

-QuanaWana

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow. I really like this write, especially the last two lines.

"And we'll pretend our hearts didn't drown
Trying to swim the oceans that separate us."

Sometimes that happens, and it's so sad when it does. Truly fantastic piece here. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Spacecadet

9 Years Ago

I appreciate it, Madalyn :) Your kind words are humbling!
I really liked this and the point you were trying to make in it. I especially enjoyed the second paragraph, but the whole thing had wonderful imagery to it. The title as well was interesting, it kind of caught me off-guard, but I liked it. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Spacecadet

9 Years Ago

I'm so happy you enjoyed it! The title is about slaying the demons of our day-to-day lives that hold.. read more
This is beautiful. We all need to just take a moment and stop, reflecting on the breathtaking moments of life.

~Stefanie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Spacecadet

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Stefanie :) Yes, I think that's important too..
Life is about simplicity, living each and every moment as if it were our last. This poem is a reflection of such, so well written, from the depths of your heart and soul.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Spacecadet

9 Years Ago

Aw, thank you. This warms my heart :) I'm so happy that my passion is being noticed.
Traci

9 Years Ago

Your passion as a poet is noticed, but it is your beautiful heart that writes so soulful that evokes.. read more
Spacecadet

9 Years Ago

So kind of you, my heart might burst! Haha, your words have made my day. Thank you ever so much :)read more
A very interesting poem.
"Let the promises we whispered echo
In the depths of your soul"
I like the want for love and want. The ending left me with question. I wanted to read more. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you mentioned that! I was hoping for the ending to be a little bit of a cliff-hanger, I'm h.. read more
Breathtaking and makes one stop and reflect on the sweet simplicity of it all. Nicely pen'd!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha good idea, otherwise I turn that putrid shade of green, never my favorite color. ;-)
Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

Now we wouldn't want that, would we? The shade you're wearing in your avatar does you good ^_^
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Yep warpaint always helps ;-)
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ron
This is so beautiful. Thank you for reminding us to remember the simple pleasures in life and with each other.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Spacecadet

10 Years Ago

It's really important for us to drop the pace and just look around from time to time, absorb what li.. read more
ron

10 Years Ago

Yes I agree.

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Added on March 25, 2014
Last Updated on April 17, 2014
Tags: Poetry, Romance, Lost, Memories, Prose

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I'm a student, moody writer and keen discoverer of soulful writing. Everything I write is right from my heart. Being a hopeless romantic, my favorite genre to read and write is romance. Heartbreak mak.. more..

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