Dreams of Longing

A Poem by Jane Doe

Something I wrote after a particularly intense dream.

Riding on the wake of a dream

Swirling surreal emotions, raw

Tenderness, gentleness,

Deep and profound

Longing, sharp and piercing

Wishing for what is unwanted

Incomplete, defenseless,

Searching for something never lost

Yearning hunger abides

After the dream subsides

A woeful, wistful whisper

Echoing on the winter wind

© 2008 Jane Doe

Just the aftereffects of dreaming.

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Angel Baby

Awwwww nice, I can so relate to this poem. Very descriptive, imagery perfect. Well done! Another great write from one one my favorite poetess. Keep up the good work. PW

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Wunderlich

This is a cool, descriptive, well written poem. Nice job.

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In Process

Ahhh, yes.....I can relate.

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Added on October 25, 2008

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Jane Doe

Eden Prairie, MN

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"Well-behaved women rarely make history." I have a tendency towards insanity and a unique way of viewing this drama we call life. I have no problem sharing the thoughts that lurk within my twisted ps.. [more]