Moving Apart

Moving Apart

A Poem by spence
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Short sad poem written for a contest

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My love I love you so

And I don’t want to go

But in my heart of hearts I know

It’s time to let you let me go

So far- we came so far

Our love shone like the brightest star

And it breaks my aching heart

To know our lives must be lived apart

© 2010 spence


Author's Note

spence
I'm not one for soppy writing, but felt like taking up the challenge! Any good? Did you cry? ; )

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Nice, it actually brought me very close to tears.....Short but powerful, like a punch in the chest and yet melancholy....Very good, especially considering your inexperience. I am impressed! Great work as always Spence, nice to see youre trying something new too. It might have been written for the contest, but I think its a good stand-alone poem too.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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spence
spence

Grimsby, United Kingdom



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Just returning to WritersCafe after a couple of years in the wilderness of life. I'm a 40 year old (until December 2013, at least) father of two, former youth and community worker, sometime socio-pol.. more..

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