INVISIBLE YET POWERFUL

INVISIBLE YET POWERFUL

A Poem by SAYED THANGAL
"

Do not consider the invisible things as minute and infirm.

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INVISIBLE YET POWERFUL

Horrible utterances and frantic movements
Of helpless souls,
Struggling the shivering hands, legs unsteady
with tongues dried, hollowness in the eyes.

Still, out of range, the shore
Twisting and tossing the vessel
Defenceless against the waves,
Gigantic, roaring and rushing.

The panoramic view blocked by the mountain clouds
And aimless fly of sea birds
Of sweat music turned to wild
Bowling with reddish staring.

The bright, but closed the eyes
The moon from above, unable
To see the torture, ears shut the stars
Unbearable to hear the the mass cries.

Invisible, yet powerful, the wind
No other way for the mortals, but  yield.

sayed thangal

© 2014 SAYED THANGAL


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Simply beautiful.....well written and straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thanks for your review
invisible, yet powerful, the wind
how strong such a line is
such power in words!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thanks a lot dear for your review
So lovely.We cannot see the wind but we feel it and it is great :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

so like wise the God, invisible but powerful. thanks for your review
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Sometime the things that are not tangible are the most powerful, nicely constructed sayed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

God, unseen, yet powerful , think such a way,.........
very nice poem thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thanks a lot dear, visit you soon
"aimless fly of sea birds

Of sweat music turned to wild

Bowling with reddish staring.




The bright, but closed the eyes

The moon from above, unable

To see the torture, ears shut the stars

Unbearable to hear the the mass cries."

It is true that when souls are helpless they utter horrible things and move frantically...
We should appreciate the small things...A splendid read and write...




Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thanks a lot for your encouragements
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:)..............
Well crafted poem Sayed. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SAYED THANGAL

10 Years Ago

thanks dear
Praveeta

10 Years Ago

You are welcome talented friend.

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Added on January 30, 2014
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SAYED THANGAL
SAYED THANGAL

malappuram, kerala, India



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I'm Sayed Thangal from Malappuram distric, Kerala, India, have been working as a teacher in English at Gvt. Higher secondary school Vazhakkad . Two years before I wrote two poems, the response and en.. more..

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