imperfections

Youve got a fine toothed comb for picking out imperfections but ill warn you up front girl theres a lot more residing, in this neat little  package I come dressed in.

ive got scars tendon deep that refuse to heal and still make me weak at the knees when I try to rethink their topics. ill caution, that Ive got 1001 problems but only 999 pockets, and its wrecking me. this chest cavitiy is packed tight with the knowing that the rest could flow out unexpectingly. Causing chaotic destruction in the bottle Rocket form. Not enough room to breath but still enough oxygen to burn. Did I mention I also keep padlocks on this soul colored blue? so many That not even I know all the codes to? Good luck decrypting my mind, im honestly withering at the astonishment that your willing to try. But I think the key is going to be realizing that girl you and me we come from the same seed, were just like the ABCs and twinkle twinkle,little stars . same tune, different scars.

But you seee, now im just trying to take this situation I've been placed in and make it my haven. Turn these monsters into creative creations and demons into imaginary friends just figments of my imagination. But it's harder said then done, as is with all I've learned. I could sit and write about directions for hours, but still take a wrong turn.

Author's Note

roughhh but would like reviews

Reviews

[katy]

I would love to hear you read this in a slam-poetry competition. I like how you used the words "girl" to be vague but still intentional. I also appreciate the format and how it reads like a paragraph, it feels very aggressive. Any other format would come off despondent and lacking attitude. I'm not sure what is going on with the randomly capitalized letters. It is intentional? I cannot tell. My only suggestion is to KEEP GOING, I want more!

[anonnn]

Thank you so much it means a lot! Yeah slam poetry is definitely my interest. But the capital letters are juat because I wrote this in my phone at work and it messed with the letters.